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Помогите пожалуйста с правильным переводом бедному студенту-технарю! Нужно блеснуть знанием английского языка или по-крайней мере сделать вид . Это рассказ о себе при поступлении в аспирантуру. Заранее благодарен.


Let me introduce myself. My name is Victor.
I would like to tell to you about my scientific work. I have graduated from the university Pryazovskyi State Technical University, in 2014 I have received the diploma of the expert with qualification “Engineering materials technology” for this reason - have wished to continue training, Research of properties metastable an austenite »proceeded during the master of formation of degree under the program«. I protected the final qualifying work "Research of a microstructure and mechanical properties of steels with metastable an austenite",
The purpose of the dissertation of the master consists in working out of scientific bases and methods of improvement of steels with metastable an austenite by means of the plasma superficial processing which realisation will provide to solve a problem resource conservation, replacement of more expensive details of cars which I work in the conditions of intensive wear process thus is possible.
I think, that, while I was learning for my master's degree I got an important experience of research work.
In the course of study at university I took part in several conferences, such as: “the Science - the first steps” in such sections as "Physics", “Chemical technology and engineering”, “Metallurgical science and thermal processing of metals”
My supervisor of studies is the doctor of pedagogical sciences, the professor. It is the known scientist at our university. And it will be my head further.
Hoping to arrive in postgraduate study, I will probably continue wider research of a theme of my thesis because this theme is pleasant to me also it is key, both for our city and for all country presently. Perhaps, I will continue a theme of my dissertational work. I want to enter the post – graduate course because I’m very interested in science and want to contribute to its development. And I hope that my dreams will come true. Thank you for your attention.

на скорую руку: только что приехали с долгих выходных.
Let me introduce myself. My name is Victor.
I would like to tell you about my scientific work. I've recently graduated from the Pryazovskyi State Technical University where I received the Diploma in “Engineering technology of materials” in 2014.
а дальше непонятно!
это Ваш Мастер?
педадог что ли? как это?

доктор педагогических наук.
Будет руководить технарем?

Courtney Love, ну и про тоже. пусть на русском настрочит что хотел сказать то.

Мне еще как-то режет слух
у нас НР всегда называли scientific advisor.


Dr SG, как правильнее?

supervisor.

Позвольте мне представиться. Меня зовут Виктор.
Я хотел бы рассказать вам о моей научной работе. Я окончил университет Приазовский государственный технический университет, в 2014 году я получил диплом специалиста с квалификацией “Инженерное материалловедение” именно поэтому - пожелал продолжить обучение, продолжал обучение в магистратуре по программе «Исследование свойств метастабильного аустенита». Я защищал дипломную работу по теме "Исследование микроструктуры и механических свойств сталей с метастабильным аустенитом ",
Цель моей магистерской работы состоит в разработке научных основ и методов усовершенствования сталей с метастабильным аустенитом при помощи плазменной поверхностной обработки, реализация которых обеспечит решить проблему ресурсосбережения, таким образом возможна замена более дорогих деталей машин , которые работаю в условиях интенсивного изнашивания .
Я думаю, что, в то время как я учился на степень магистра я получил важный опыт научно-исследовательской работы.
В процессе учёбы в университете я принимал участие в нескольких конференциях, таких как: “Наука - первые шаги ” в таких секциях как ”Физика”, “Химические технология и инженерия”, “Металловедения и термическая обработка металлов”
Мой научный руководитель является доктор технических наук, профессор ... Он является известным ученым в нашем университете. И она будет моим руководителем дальше.
Надеясь поступить в аспирантуру , я возможно буду продолжать более широкое исследование темы моей дипломной работы , потому что мне эта тема нравится и она является ключевой, как для нашего города так и для всей страны в наше время . Может быть, я буду продолжать тему моей дипломной работы. Я хочу, чтобы войти в пост - аспирантуру, потому что я очень заинтересован в науке и хотите внести свой вклад в его развитие. И я надеюсь, что мои мечты сбудутся. Спасибо за Ваше внимание.


Let me introduce myself. My name is Victor.
I would like to tell to you about my scientific work. I have graduated from the university Priazovsky state technical university, in 2014 I have received the diploma of the expert with qualification “Engineering материалловедение” for this reason - have wished to continue training, continued training in a magistracy under the program «Research of properties metastable an austenite». I protected the thesis on a theme "Research of a microstructure and mechanical properties of steels with metastable an austenite",
The purpose of mine магистерской works consists in working out of scientific bases and methods of improvement of steels with metastable an austenite by means of the plasma superficial processing which realisation will provide to solve a problem ресурсосбережения, replacement of more expensive details of cars which I work in the conditions of intensive wear process thus is possible.
I think that while I studied as degree of the master I have received important experience of research work.
In the course of study at university I took part in several conferences, such as: “the Science - the first steps” in such sections as "Physics", “Chemical technology and engineering”, “Metallurgical science and thermal processing of metals”
My supervisor of studies is a Dr.Sci.Tech., the professor... It is the known scientist at our university. And it will be my head further.
Hoping to arrive in postgraduate study, I will probably continue wider research of a theme of my thesis because this theme is pleasant to me also it is key, both for our city and for all country presently. Perhaps, I will continue a theme of my thesis. I want to enter into a post - postgraduate study because I am very interested in a science and want to bring the contribution to its development. And I hope that my dreams will come true. Thanks for your attention.


Allow me to be presented. My name is Victor.
I would like to tell to you about my scientific work. I have graduated from the university Priazovsky state technical university, in 2014 I have received the diploma of the expert with qualification “Engineering Materials Science” for this reason - have wished to continue training, continued training in a magistracy under the program «Research of properties metastable an austenite». I protected the thesis on a theme "Research of a microstructure and mechanical properties of steels with metastable an austenite",
The purpose of mine магистерской works consists in working out of scientific bases and methods of improvement of steels with metastable an austenite by means of the plasma superficial processing which realisation will provide to solve a problem ресурсосбережения, replacement of more expensive details of cars which I work in the conditions of intensive wear process thus is possible.
I think that while I studied as degree of the master I have received important experience of research work.
In the course of study at university I took part in several conferences, such as: “the Science - the first steps” in such sections as "Physics", “Chemical technology and engineering”, “Metallurgical science and thermal processing of metals”
My supervisor of studies is a Dr. Sci. Tech., the professor... It is the known scientist at our university. And it will be my head further.
Hoping to arrive in postgraduate study, I will probably continue wider research of a theme of my thesis because this theme is pleasant to me also it is key, both for our city and for all country presently. Perhaps, I will continue a theme of my dissertational work. I want to enter into a post - postgraduate study because I am very interested in a science and want to bring the contribution to its development. And I hope that my dreams will come true. Thanks for your

Excuse for errors has asked to type the girl as went in a train from business trip. It is a final variant excuse for inconveniences. Thanks
Извините за ошибки попросил набрать девушку, так как ехал в поезде с командировки . Это конечный вариант извините за неудобства. Спасибо

Let me introduce myself. My name is Victor.
I would like to tell you about my scientific work. I've recently graduated from the Pryazovskyi State Technical University where I received the Diploma in “Engineering technology of materials” in 2014. Inspired by my undergraduate studies I continued with my training and completed MSc (Master of Science or Tech?) program "Research of properties metastable austenite». My MSc thesis titled "Microstructure and mechanical properties of steels with metastable austenite". The project involved researching and developing the scientific principles and methods on improvement of steels containing metastable austenite by treatment of its surfaces by plasma. The developed method will allow to minimise resources through longer life of parts of equipment made by the novel techniques.
I enjoyed my MSc training and I feel that I acquired that important research experience. During my time at the university I also participated in several conferences such as: “the Science - the first steps”, “Chemical technology and engineering”, “Metallurgical science and thermal processing of metals”
My current project supervisor is Prof XY, who is well known and respected specialist in the area I study. He will also lead me through my PhD project.
Наверняка чо-то упустила\не подумала
последний параграф запутан
мне своими делами надо заниматься
А Вам, молодой человек, не сдать ежели просто вбиваете в гугл транслэйт. Надо чуток попытаться самому. И на русском языке тоже более четко свои мысли излагать тоже будет в помощь.

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In my postgraduate study, I hope to continue developing my previous projects further. Research in this area is not just important to me personally, but also has practical implications for my town (or city if the town has a cathedral) and to my country. I hope that my dreams will come true. Thank you for your attention.

Большое спасибо , я все понимаю, что я "0" в английском.

Вы и в русском не особо. И правила форума не соблюдаете, основ сетевого общения не знаете (не надо было отвечать, цитируя все сообщение)