Здравствуйте, проверьте пожалуйста мой рассказ, укажите наиболее грубые ошибки. Прошу сильно не кидаться тапками, в английском я не сильна
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Let me introduce myself. My name is Elena.
I graduated from Admiral Makarov National University of Shipbuilding in Nikolaev in two thousand fourteenth year.
I received a specialist diploma in the specialty "Ships and Ocean Engineering" and got a mechanical engineer qualification.
The theme of my graduation project is "Рroject of a bulk carrier".
And I wished to continue studying, went on for a Candidate of Engineering Sciences degree by program “Engineering and technology of shipbuilding and water transport”.
I want to enter the post – graduate course because I'm interested in research in the professional field and want to contribute to its development.
The subject of my future dissertation is «Development of a mathematical model for determining the main characteristics of gas-carrier ships».
This research is actual, as new plants for the production of liquefied natural gas are being built on Yamal and new vessels are needed for its transportation.
I think, in the process of passing postgraduate course I will get much experience of research work.
My scientific supervisor is the doctor of Engineering Sciences, professor ***. He is a famous scientist in our university.
Now I'm getting starting a job as a design engineer at the Baltic plant. My main function will be to develop the design documentation. I planing to combine work and study. And I believe that this will help me in my researching and writing my dissertation.
I’m very interested in science and I hope that my dreams will come true. Thank you for your attention.
P.S. спасибо Олесе из этого топика, взяла ее рассказ за основу.